Mystery: What's over there

Did some playing in the studio last night. Here is a little taste of it. This is still a draft... not quite ready for istockphoto yet.

Mystery: What's over there  [draft]

What do you think? Have that "Nancy Drew/Scooby Doo" kids snooping around type of feel to it?

Next shoot: Bring fog machine to be able to see the beam from the flashlight. Maybe another light for some highlighting on the clothing. I shot some with a ringflash for fill, but it far overpowered the background gel on the lowest setting. I might need to find a ND filter for it.